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Like a Blue Birds Song

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The man she loves, ran far away,
She wishes for him to come back.
This is a message to convey.
A heartbeat races 'round the track

She wishes for him to come back,
Love is like a blue birds song,
A heartbeat races 'round the track
melodic, agressive but very long.

Love is like a blue birds song,
Some attention, is all it seeks.
Melodic, agressive but very long,
Can grace and wonder be simply meek?

This is a mesage to convey.
The man she loves, ran far away.
Attention may be all it seeks.
Grace and wonder so simply meek.
Finally I get to writing my Pantoum. I'm sorry its been so late. I know i have not submitted much in the past few weeks. I've been a tad bit lonely and played my video game.

Now alas I have completed my own challenge. and It wasn;t all that hard. however I dont think mine makes much sense... I just hope you all like,


A1 B1 C1 A2
B1 C1 D1 A1
A2 B2 C2 D1
B2 C2 D2 D2

The last stanza differentiate between two formats. Check out the link below to know the other form!

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All work is written by me. Got stanza form from [link]
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alexisbobo's avatar
:D :D :D :love: ah this is so much better than mine, and it actually makes sense!